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Re: [Softwires] draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-deployment

Alain Durand <adurand@juniper.net> Tue, 15 November 2011 02:56 UTC

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From: Alain Durand <adurand@juniper.net>
To: Nejc Škoberne <nejc@skoberne.net>
Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:55:55 -0800
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Thank you for the quick review! Hope to see the other 2 reviews coming soon.

Alain.

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On Nov 15, 2011, at 5:15 AM, "Nejc Škoberne" <nejc@skoberne.net> wrote:

> Dear authors,
> 
> I volunteered yesterday at the Softwires IETF 82 meeting to be one of 
> the reviewers of your draft. I reviewed it and I am sending the link 
> to the PDF which includes all the proposed changes and my comments. I
> also tried to address some typos and grammar mistakes, but I since I
> am not a native speaker, some of those fixes could be wrong too.
> 
> I hope you don't mind the PDF format of the review, it just seemed to
> be the easiest way for me to do this.
> 
> http://nejc.skoberne.net/transfer/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf
> http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1104483/dslite-deployment-comments.pdf (backup link)
> 
> Regards,
> Nejc
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