Re: [Softwires] WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel-01

Hi Yong,

Further to my previous email.

During the review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang, there is a comment about following the published format for the Security Considerations section of a document containing a YANG module. I wasn’t previously aware of this:

https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>

As this comment will also be applicable to draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel, I think we need to rewrite the Security Considerations section accordingly.

Thanks,
Ian

> On 8. Jan 2019, at 17:48, ianfarrer@gmx.com wrote:
> 
> HI Yong,
> 
> Sorry for the late response. I’m still catching up after the holidays…
> 
> As a co-author, I support this document progressing. As you mention below, separating out the iftunnels module from draft-ietf-softwire-yang into a new draft was requested during the IANA review.  meaning that draft-ietf-softwire-yang (currently with the IESG) now has a normative reference to this draft.
> 
> Regarding the draft itself, the iftunnel module itself has already been through the final WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-yang. As it models the IANA tunnelType Definitions registry (https://www.iana.org/assignments/smi-numbers/smi-numbers.xhtml#smi-numbers-6 <https://www.iana.org/assignments/smi-numbers/smi-numbers.xhtml#smi-numbers-6>), we’ve tried to keep the format in line with other, similar documents with YANG modules for other IANA registries (e.g. RFC7224).
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian
> 
>> On 19. Dec 2018, at 08:26, Yong Cui <cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn <mailto:cuiyong@tsinghua.edu.cn>> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear all,
>> 
>> There were the following progress on Softwire YANG and related work during the past couple of months:
>> 	• draft-ietf-softwire-yang completed WGLC
>> 	• During expert review, a YANG module for the iana-iftunnel registry was requested as the softwire module needs to reference it.
>> 	• draft-ietf-softwire-yang was updated to include this module and Sheng ran a WGLC on the new content. This passed without comment.
>> 	• During IANA review, it was requested that the iana-iftunnel YANG module was put into a separate document.
>> 	• draft-ietf-softwire-yang was updated, removing the iana-iftunnel YANG module, and draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel was published containing just the module (it was posted as a WG doc as the content etc. is already under the scope of draft-ietf-softwire-yang)
>> 
>> So now, we’d like to issue a WGLC for draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel-01. 
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel/>
>> 
>> Considering the coming Christmas and New Year, I would extend the WGLC to 3 weeks, i.e. Dec. 19, 2018 - Jan. 9, 2019. Please send your comments to our softwire mailing list, including your support or concerns.
>> 
>> 
>> Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
>> 
>> Yong & Ian
>> 
> 
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