[Softwires] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 12 June 2019 01:26 UTC

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Subject: [Softwires] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A few editorial nits:

-- Section 3.  Per “Depending on the deployment scenario …”, this sentence
doesn’t parse for me.  I think s/so// would address it.

-- Section 3.1.4.2.  Typo.  s/pecifies/specifies/