[lamps] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-15: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 10 January 2018 21:01 UTC
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Subject: [lamps] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-15: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I cleared my DISCUSS concerning the need to update RFC 5280, since Russ tells me those updates are already in draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update. However, I still think the text in sections 1, 4, and 6 should be clarified to avoid the impression that those updates are done by _this_ document. Editorial Comments and Nits: - section 3: -- Please proofread section 3 for missing articles. -- please consider reformulating " ... subjectAltName MUST only be used when ..." in the form of "... MUST NOT be used unless..." (MUST ONLY can be ambiguous about whether you mean "MUST NOT unless" or "MUST do this and nothing else.") - 4: "... (and avoids any "mappings" mentioned in that document)" s/avoids/avoid
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