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From: "Brockhaus, Hendrik" <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-04.txt
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Russ 

Thank you for your suggestion.
The update of the draft is on it's way.

Hendrik

> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> Von: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
> 
> >>
> >> In Section 7, it says "following guidelines should be followed".
> >> That is a bit awkward.  More importantly, the things that follow are
> >> the criteria, and then there is a SHOULD statement.  I thnk the
> >> sentence introducing the bullets could reflect this better.
> >
> > I suggest the following change:
> >
> > Old
> > "the following guidelines should be followed."
> >
> > New
> > "the following criteria SHOULD guide the choice of algorithms used for
> managing certificates."
> 
> I suggest:
> "the following criteria will help implementers choose appropriate algorithms for
> managing certificates:"
> 
> Russ

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