Re: [lamps] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-11.txt

[Wei Chuang <[e-mail]>]

On Thu, Jun 22, 2017 at 6:39 AM, Russ Housley <[e-mail]> wrote:

> I have a few minor comments on this document.
>
>
> Section 5 says:
>
>    ... (section 7.5 and 7.2 in [RFC5280]) ...
>
> These sections are updated by draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update-01.
> It would help the reader to point to this document as well.  Maybe:
>
>    ... (sections 7.2 and 7.5 in [RFC5280] as updated by
> [ID-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update]) ...
>
>
Done.


>
> Section 6 says:
>
>    … this specification modifies and
>    extends rfc822Name name SmtpUTF8Name does not violate existing name
>    constraints.
>
> I cannot figure out what this sentence is trying to say.  Please reword.
>

Clarified by expanding the text.


>
>
> Section 6 has text to forbid constraints on the local-part of email
> addresses.
> This update to RFC 5280 is already included in
> draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5280-i18n-update-01.
> I do not think that it needs to be in both documents.  I suggest that this
> document
> point to the change.
>

References that draft.


>
>
> In Section 8:
>   s/in Section Section 3/In Section 3/
>   s/Section Appendix A./Appendix A./
>

Done.


>
>
> In Appendix A, please remove "Figure 2” from the end of the ASN.1 module.
>
>
Done.


>
> I hope these few comments can be addressed in the next few days.  They are
> all simple.
>
> Russ
>

-Wei


>
>
>
> > On Jun 19, 2017, at 3:51 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> >
> >
> > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-11.txt
> > has been successfully submitted by Weihaw Chuang and posted to the
> > IETF repository.
> >
> > Name:         draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses
> > Revision:     11
> > Title:                Internationalized Email Addresses in X.509
> certificates
> > Document date:        2017-06-18
> > Group:                lamps
> > Pages:                11
> > URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-
> drafts/draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-11.txt
> > Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-eai-
> addresses/
> > Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lamps-eai-
> addresses-11
> > Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/
> doc/html/draft-ietf-lamps-eai-addresses-11
> > Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lamps-eai-
> addresses-11
> >
> > Abstract:
> >   This document defines a new name form for inclusion in the otherName
> >   field of an X.509 Subject Alternative Name and Issuer Alternative
> >   Name extension that allows a certificate subject to be associated
> >   with an Internationalized Email Address.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > The IETF Secretariat
> >
>
>