Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt

Corey Bonnell <cbonnell@outlook.com> Tue, 04 December 2018 11:44 UTC

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From: Corey Bonnell <cbonnell@outlook.com>
To: Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org>, "spasm@ietf.org" <spasm@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt
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Hi Jacob,
Minor typo in section Section 8: “In
   particular, it specifies that parameters are separated with hyphens“. “Hyphens” should be replaced with “semicolons”.

Thanks,
Corey

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From: Spasm <spasm-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org>
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Subject: Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt

Changes in draft-04 vs draft-03:

Addresseshttps://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4062

 - Updated the canonical presentation format for the value field to
indicate that it's not length-limited.

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 - Fixed the example zones to make example.com absolute (ends in .)

Removes "Certification Authority Restriction Flags" subsection under
"IANA Considerations." Now "IANA Considerations just reads:

IANA is requested to add [[[ RFC Editor: Please replace with this RFC ]]] as
a reference for the Certification Authority Restriction Flags and
Certification Authority Restriction Properties registries.

Adds Corey Bonnell and Tim Hollebeek to Acknowledgements.

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