Re: [lamps] Preparing the shepherd write-up for rfc6844bis

Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org> Tue, 30 October 2018 17:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [lamps] Preparing the shepherd write-up for rfc6844bis
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I'll fix these, thanks!

On 10/30/18 10:04 AM, Russ Housley wrote:
> IDnits reports the following problems:
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> idnits 2.16.0
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>    Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist :
>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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>    == The 'Obsoletes: ' line in the draft header should list only the
>       _numbers_ of the RFCs which will be obsoleted by this document (if
>       approved); it should not include the word 'RFC' in the list.
>
> {{{ Easy to fix, and I would not say anything if this was the only issue. }}}
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>    -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC6844, but the
>       abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
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> {{{ Please add a sentence to the Abstract. }}}
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>    Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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>       (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
>       to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)
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>    == Missing Reference: 'STD13' is mentioned on line 194, but not defined
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> {{{ Perhaps you meant to reference RFC 1035 here. }}}
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>    ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 3647
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> {{{ Can this be moved to an Informational reference? }}}
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>    ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5070 (Obsoleted by RFC 7970)
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> {{{ Is there a reason to not reference RFC 7970? }}}
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>    ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5226 (Obsoleted by RFC 8126)
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> {{{ Is there a reason to not reference RFC 8126? }}}
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> Russ
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