[lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 15 May 2022 03:43 UTC

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Subject: [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2022-05-14
IETF LC End Date: 2022-05-11
IESG Telechat date: 2022-06-02

Summary:
This document describes the changes to the Certificate Management protocol and
explains why the changes are needed. The description is very clear.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
Will the updated CMP be published as a whole? instead of requiring readers to
refer to multiple RFCs?

Thanks, Linda Dunbar

[lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lam… Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Re: [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Russ Housley
Re: [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Brockhaus, Hendrik
Re: [lamps] [Last-Call] Genart last call review o… Lars Eggert