Re: [spring] WGLC for draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy

Satoru Matsushima <satoru.matsushima@gmail.com> Thu, 29 April 2021 13:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [spring] WGLC for draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy
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Hi spring chairs, 

I think that the document is ready to move forward.

Here one minor comment is bellow:

Section 6.2 says on BSID as follow:

   When the active candidate path has a specified BSID, the SR Policy
   uses that BSID if this value (label in MPLS, IPv6 address in SRv6) is
   available (i.e., not associated with any other usage: e.g. to another
   MPLS client, to another SID, to another SR Policy).

My suggestion for that above text as follow:

   When the active candidate path has a specified BSID, the SR Policy
   uses that BSID if this value (label in MPLS, IPv6 address in SRv6) is
   available (i.e., not associated with any other usage: e.g. to another
   MPLS client, to another SID, to another SR Policy, within the range of locators in SRv6).

Best regards,
--satoru

> On Apr 16, 2021, at 3:57, James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com> wrote:
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> Dear WG:
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> This email starts a 2 week Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy [1].
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> Please read this document if you haven’t read the most recent version and send your comments to the SPRING WG list no later than April 29th 2021.
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> If you are raising a point which you expect will be specifically debated on the mailing list, consider using a specific email/thread for this point.
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> Lastly, if you are an author or contributors for this document please response to the IPR call in the previous email thread.
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> Thanks!
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> Jim, Joel & Bruno
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> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy/
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