Re: [spring] I-D Action: draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt

["Pablo Camarillo (pcamaril)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi SPRING,

We have published a new revision of draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming that addresses comments received throughout this week.
Many thanks to those who have reviewed. I will be replying individually to each thread.

Human readable diff below.

Thank you,
Pablo (on behalf of coauthors).

Diff:
-	Removed unclear sentence in terminology section related to Reduced SRH as requested by Brian
-	Clarification on how ARGs are established as requested by Adrian
-	Updated End.X pseudocode to address concerns as per the conversation with Ron
-	Updated End.DT2M behavior to improve the definition of Arg.FE2
-	Renamed Transit Behaviors section as discussed with Adrian
o		Removed base transit behavior (not standardizing anything at all)
o		Renamed section to capture that these are “SR Policy Headend behaviors”
o		Renamed T.Encaps (and others) into H.Encaps
-	Few minor editorial changes on section 8 to improve readability
-	Fixed typo on IANA section (9.2)
-	Removed reference for draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy. All text needed is covered in RFC8402.


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Subject: [spring] I-D Action: draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt

    
    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    This draft is a work item of the Source Packet Routing in Networking WG of the IETF.
    
            Title           : SRv6 Network Programming
            Authors         : Clarence Filsfils
                              Pablo Camarillo Garvia
                              John Leddy
                              Daniel Voyer
                              Satoru Matsushima
                              Zhenbin Li
    	Filename        : draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt
    	Pages           : 38
    	Date            : 2019-12-19
    
    Abstract:
       The SRv6 Network Programming framework enables a network operator or
       an application to specify a packet packet processing program by
       encoding a sequence of instructions in the IPv6 packet header.
    
       Each instruction is implemented on one or several nodes in the
       network and identified by an SRv6 Segment Identifier in the packet.
    
       This document defines the SRv6 Network Programming concept and
       specifies the base set of SRv6 behaviors that enables the creation of
       interoperable overlays with underlay optimization (Service Level
       Agreements).
    
    
    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming/
    
    There are also htmlized versions available at:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07
    
    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07
    
    
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