Re: [spring] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08

bruno.decraene@orange.com Thu, 15 July 2021 16:04 UTC

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Dave, Thank you for your review, especially this close to IETF deadlines/meeting.

Authors, please have a look at the editorial comments and update the draft as needed.

--Bruno

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dave Thaler via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> Sent: Wednesday, July 14, 2021 12:54 AM
> To: int-dir@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr.all@ietf.org; spring@ietf.org
> Subject: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
> 
> Reviewer: Dave Thaler
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> Reviewer: Dave Thaler
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
> Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments
> just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and
> resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been
> received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.
> 
> Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this
> document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own.
> 
> I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial
> comments which can be found in the PDF at
> https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2021/07/draft-ietf-spring-
> nsh-sr-08-dthaler.pdf
> 
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