[spring] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08

Dave Thaler via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 13 July 2021 22:53 UTC

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Reviewer: Dave Thaler
Review result: Ready with Nits

Reviewer: Dave Thaler
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments
just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and
resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been
received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this
document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own.

I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial
comments which can be found in the PDF at
https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2021/07/draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-dthaler.pdf