Re: [spring] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08

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From: James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>
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Subject: Re: [spring] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
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Hi Dave,

Thank you for your review, very helpful! I have updated the document as per your comments.

Jim

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To: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>om>; int-dir@ietf.org
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Subject: RE: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08

Dave, Thank you for your review, especially this close to IETF deadlines/meeting.

Authors, please have a look at the editorial comments and update the draft as needed.

--Bruno

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> Subject: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
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> Reviewer: Dave Thaler
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> Reviewer: Dave Thaler
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet 
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