Re: [stir] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Thu, 27 May 2021 17:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [stir] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02
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Ben:

I did try to follow the conventions in RFC 8226.  That said, I'm happy to hear what might make the sepc easier to understand.

Russ

> On May 27, 2021, at 1:12 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
> 
> (dons shepherd hat)
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> The current quote usage seems to follow the convention of RFC 8226. One could argue about whether 8226 did it right, but it is what it is.
> 
> (I’d argue that “orig” refers to a human-readable-text JWT claim, thus the quotes, while mustInclude refers to an X.509 extension encoded in ASN.1. But that would be just making up stuff.)
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Ben.
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>> On May 27, 2021, at 11:11 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com <mailto:superuser@gmail.com>> wrote:
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>> A brief AD review; I'm going to Last Call this now as my feedback is minor, so please just factor this in as Last Call feedback:
>> 
>> In Section 3 (and later), stuff like mustInclude and permittedValues aren't quoted, but smaller things like "iat", "orig", and "dest" are.  More generally I found the use or non-use of quotes felt inconsistent.  I don't have a preferred solution, just something to consider.  I don't know what, if anything, the RFC Editor might do if they observe the same.
>> 
>> -MSK
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>> On Tue, May 25, 2021 at 1:10 PM Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
>> Robert Sparks has requested publication of draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02 as Proposed Standard on behalf of the STIR working group.
>> 
>> Please verify the document's state at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226/>
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