Re: [stir] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-06.txt

[Russ Housley <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the updates to this document.  It addresses all of my major and minor comments, but a few of the nits are not addressed.  I provide those again below.  As they are nits, I do think think they should prevent the document from moving forward to the IESG.  Please consider the nits to be early IETF Last Call comments.

Nits:

The document uses 'div' and "div".  It also used 'dest' and "dest".
Please pick one convention, and then use it throughout the document.

    The single quote version still appears in section headings.

The 'Updates' line in the title page header should list only the numbers
of the to-be-updated RFCs (if approved).

   It should be:  Updates: 8224 (if approved) 

Russ


> On Jul 8, 2019, at 11:09 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Secure Telephone Identity Revisited WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : PASSporT Extension for Diverted Calls
>        Author          : Jon Peterson
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 17
> 	Date            : 2019-07-08
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document extends PASSporT, which is specified in RFC 8225 to
>   convey cryptographically-signed information about the people involved
>   in personal communications, to include an indication that a call has
>   been diverted from its original destination to a new one.  This
>   information can greatly improve the decisions made by verification
>   services in call forwarding scenarios.  Also specified here is an
>   encapsulation mechanism for nesting a PASSporT within another
>   PASSporT that assists relying parties in some diversion scenarios.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert/