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Re: [stir] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Thu, 27 May 2021 16:12 UTC

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Date: Thu, 27 May 2021 09:11:59 -0700
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Subject: Re: [stir] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02
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A brief AD review; I'm going to Last Call this now as my feedback is minor,
so please just factor this in as Last Call feedback:

In Section 3 (and later), stuff like mustInclude and permittedValues aren't
quoted, but smaller things like "iat", "orig", and "dest" are.  More
generally I found the use or non-use of quotes felt inconsistent.  I don't
have a preferred solution, just something to consider.  I don't know what,
if anything, the RFC Editor might do if they observe the same.

-MSK




On Tue, May 25, 2021 at 1:10 PM Robert Sparks via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Robert Sparks has requested publication of
> draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02 as Proposed Standard on behalf of the
> STIR working group.
>
> Please verify the document's state at
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226/
>
>
>

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