Re: [stir] WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-cert-delegation-03

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From: "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@team.neustar>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, IETF STIR Mail List <stir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [stir] WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-cert-delegation-03
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Thanks Russ, we'll fix those on the way through IETF LC.

Jon Peterson
Neustar, Inc.

On 8/4/20, 1:19 PM, "stir on behalf of Russ Housley" <stir-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:

    I reviewed draft-ietf-stir-cert-delegation-03 to see whether my comments against the previous version were resolved.  They were.
    
    While doing the review, I discovered two very minor editorial nits (see below).  This nits should not block progress to the IESG, but it should be fixed with any other comments that come up during IETF Last Call.
    
    Nit in Section 5.1, para 1.  The last sentence says:
    
       Authentication services SHOULD NOT use a
       delegate certificate without validating that its scope of authority
       is encompassed by that of its parent certificate, and if that
       certificate has a own parent, the entire certification path SHOULD be
       validated.
    
    It looks like you were interrupted while editing this sentence.  Please drop "own".
    
    In addition, there is an outdated reference; draft-ietf-acme-star has been published as RFC 8739.
    
    Russ
    
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