Re: [stir] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03

Subir Das <subirdas21@gmail.com> Wed, 04 April 2018 15:08 UTC

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From: Subir Das <subirdas21@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Apr 2018 11:08:25 -0400
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Subject: Re: [stir] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
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Brian,
Thanks for your review. We will address the comments and submit another
version.

-Subir

On Mon, Apr 2, 2018 at 10:36 PM, Brian Carpenter <
brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>; wrote:

> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready
>
> Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-stir-rph-03.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2018-04-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-06
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19
>
> Summary: Ready
> --------
>
> Comments:
> ---------
> This is a well written draft and I have no technical comments.
>
> The draft says it extends RFC8225. Some people would say that needs
> an Updates: 8225 header.
>
> Nits:
> -----
>
> 8.1.  Normative References
>
>    [I-D.ietf-stir-passport]
>               Wendt, C. and J. Peterson, "Personal Assertion Token
>               (PASSporT)", February 2017.
>
> Is now RFC8225.
>
>    [I-D.ietf-stir-rfc4474bis]
>               Peterson, J., Jennings, C., Rescorla, E., and C. Wendt,
>               "Authenticated Identity Management in the Session
>               Initiation Protocol (SIP)", February 2017.
>
> Is now RFC8224.
>
>
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