Re: [stir] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02.txt

Hi All,

I have updated the draft with some fixes based on comments from Christer, both editorial and related to ordering comments.

Summary of changes:

- addressing Christer’s comments around order of claims adding a brief new section
- clarified the definition of “customer” in the PASSporT ‘attest’ claim section 4
- clarified that it is calling party telephone number that is being attested to in same section
- removed last sentence in section 7, it’s repetitive and not needed.

I figured i would include these changes and update document for efficiency, but will review these in meeting on Thursday in either case.

-Chris

> On Mar 19, 2018, at 5:12 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Secure Telephone Identity Revisited WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : PASSporT SHAKEN Extension (SHAKEN)
>        Authors         : Chris Wendt
>                          Mary Barnes
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02.txt
> 	Pages           : 7
> 	Date            : 2018-03-19
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document extends PASSporT, which is a token object that conveys
>   cryptographically-signed information about the participants involved
>   in communications, to include information defined as part of the
>   SHAKEN specification from ATIS (Alliance for Telecommunications
>   Industry Solutions) and the SIP Forum IP-NNI Joint Task Force.  These
>   extensions provide a level of confidence in the correctness of the
>   originating identity for a telephone network that has communications
>   coming from both STIR participating originating communications as
>   well as communications that does not include STIR information.
> 
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