Re: [stir] WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-messaging-02

I reviewed the document and it's about ready.  My only comment is that
there is an awful lot of "could"s and "would"s for a Standards Track
document (a dozen or more of those and only 2 MUSTs).  I think some of it
could be reworded to be more normative - e.g., there are some "would
requires", but likely is not worth the effort.   I may have missed
discussion on this, but if there isn't a good reason for Standards Track,
it probably should be informational - JWT claims and PASSporT types are
both just "Specification Required" unless I've missed something.  I can see
a Gen-ART or other directorate reviewer bringing this up (I would ;)

Regards,
Mary.

On Tue, May 10, 2022 at 1:55 PM Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Yesterday was the deadline for WGLC feedback on draft-ietf-stir-messaging.
> We have 2 reviews, but would like to have more. Is anyone else willing to
> sign up to review the draft? I’m going to pick on a few people privately,
> but anyone can volunteer. Even a review of the form “I read it and it is
> ready” is helpful.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben.
>
> On May 5, 2022, at 10:44 AM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> This is a gentle reminder that the WGLC for draft-ietf-stir-messaging-02
> ends Monday. Please send your feedback soon.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben.
>
> On Apr 24, 2022, at 6:53 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> This is a 2-week STIR working group last call of
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-messaging .
>
> Please send feedback to the authors and the mail list by Monday, 9 May by
> the end-of-business wherever you are. All feedback is welcome, including
> feedback of the form of “I read this and it is ready to progress.”
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben (For the STIR chairs).
>
>
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