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Re: [stir] Second WGLC: draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-05

"Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@team.neustar> Tue, 16 April 2019 16:39 UTC

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From: "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@team.neustar>
To: Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com>, IETF STIR Mail List <stir@ietf.org>
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Thanks Sean, these are pretty straightforward, I'll get them fixed.

Jon Peterson
Neustar, Inc.

On 4/15/19, 6:36 PM, "stir on behalf of Sean Turner" <stir-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of sean@sn3rd.com> wrote:

    I just had nits and Russ caught most of them.  Here are mine:
    
    0) Example in s3 and s5 should use .cer not .pkx to algin with RFC8225->RFC2985.
    
    1) s3: I think this:
    
      PASSporTs of type "div-o" (see Section 5)
      MUST contain an "opt”.
    
    Should go in s5 and not in s3 since s3 is just about “div”?
    
    2) s7 - I know UAC is in RFC 8224, but I am not sure that most will know what it is so maybe spell this one out: User Agent Client (UAC). And, should “user agent” in the penultimate para be UAC?
    
    3) s8 - Where is “hi” defined?
    
    4) s10 - There are two sets of registrations so maybe add a new heading level:
    
    10. IANA Considerations
    
      This documents includes registration for JSON Web Token Claims (see Section 10.1) and PASSporT Type Registrations (see Section 10.2).
    
    10.1 JSON Web Token Claims
    
       This specification requests that the IANA add two new claims to the
       JSON Web Token Claims registry as defined in [RFC7519].
    
    renumber 10.1. to 10.1.1
    renumber 10.2. to 10.1.2
    
    5)  Appendix A has an example key pair and to stop people from being silly and using it anywhere in a production system we should warn them not to:
    
       WARNING: Do not use the key pair in production systems.
    
    or something like that.
    
    spt
    
    
    > On Mar 31, 2019, at 16:01, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote:
    > 
    > This is the second Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert, which is now at revision -05.
    > 
    > Please send your comments to the list or the chairs by Friday, 19 April 2019. (This leaves a little over three weeks since many have travel plans after the IETF week).
    > 
    > Robert and Russ
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