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Re: [stir] WG Last Call Comments: draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-05

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 15 April 2019 19:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [stir] WG Last Call Comments: draft-ietf-stir-passport-divert-05
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trimming to one thing in the nits:


On 4/15/19 2:14 PM, Peterson, Jon wrote:
>
>>      Suggestion for the start of the Abstract: "This document extends
>>      PASSporT, which is specified in RFC 8224 to convey cryptographically-
>>      signed ..."
> I thought we weren't supposed to put references in the abstract (apart from notes about RFC obsoleted etc. by this spec).
>      

We aren't allowed to use references in the [see the references section] 
sense. It's perfectly fine to name other RFCs.

RjS

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