Re: [stir] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02.txt

Section 8, Order of Claim Keys, now says:

   The order of the claim keys MUST follow the rules of [RFC8225]
   Section 9 and be in lexixgraphic order.  Therefore, the claim keys
   MUST appear in the PASSporT Payload in the following order,

   o  attest

   o  dest

   o  iat

   o  orig

   o  origid

I assume that other extensions will be specified in the future,  so I am wondering if it would be better to say:

8.  Order of Claim Keys

   The order of the claim keys MUST follow the rules of [RFC8225]
   Section 9; the claim keys MUST appear in lexicographic order.
   Therefore, the claim keys discussed in this document appear in
   the PASSporT Payload in the following order:

   o  attest

   o  dest

   o  iat

   o  orig

   o  origid

Russ

> On Mar 19, 2018, at 1:20 PM, Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net> wrote:
> 
> Hi All,
> 
> I have updated the draft with some fixes based on comments from Christer, both editorial and related to ordering comments.
> 
> Summary of changes:
> 
> - addressing Christer’s comments around order of claims adding a brief new section
> - clarified the definition of “customer” in the PASSporT ‘attest’ claim section 4
> - clarified that it is calling party telephone number that is being attested to in same section
> - removed last sentence in section 7, it’s repetitive and not needed.
> 
> I figured i would include these changes and update document for efficiency, but will review these in meeting on Thursday in either case.
> 
> -Chris
> 
> 
> 
>> On Mar 19, 2018, at 5:12 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Secure Telephone Identity Revisited WG of the IETF.
>> 
>>       Title           : PASSporT SHAKEN Extension (SHAKEN)
>>       Authors         : Chris Wendt
>>                         Mary Barnes
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02.txt
>> 	Pages           : 7
>> 	Date            : 2018-03-19
>> 
>> Abstract:
>>  This document extends PASSporT, which is a token object that conveys
>>  cryptographically-signed information about the participants involved
>>  in communications, to include information defined as part of the
>>  SHAKEN specification from ATIS (Alliance for Telecommunications
>>  Industry Solutions) and the SIP Forum IP-NNI Joint Task Force.  These
>>  extensions provide a level of confidence in the correctness of the
>>  originating identity for a telephone network that has communications
>>  coming from both STIR participating originating communications as
>>  well as communications that does not include STIR information.
>> 
>> 
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken/
>> 
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02
>> 
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-stir-passport-shaken-02
>> 
>> 
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