Re: [storm] David Black's comments - Working Group Last Call - RDMA Protocol Extensions

"Black, David" <david.black@emc.com> Wed, 16 October 2013 00:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [storm] David Black's comments - Working Group Last Call - RDMA Protocol Extensions
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Complete comments this time ...

(1) In the pseudo-code in Section 5.1.1

OLD
      carry = !(!(sum & 2))
NEW
      carry = sum & 2 >> 1

(2) IANA Considerations (Section 10)

Please add the note to the RFC Editor about [RFCXXXX] to Section 10 (it's already in 10.1 and 10.2).

Thanks,
--David
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> Tom
> > Talpey
> > Sent: Monday, September 30, 2013 4:47 PM
> > To: storm@ietf.org
> > Subject: [storm] Working Group Last Call - RDMA Protocol Extensions
> >
> > This message is to announce the STORM working group Last Call on the
> following
> > document:
> >
> > RDMA Protocol Extensions
> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-07.txt
> >
> > This document updates RFC5040 (Remote Direct Memory Access Protocol) to
> extend
> > support for new capabilities in support of RDMA-aware applications and upper
> > layers.
> >
> > Last Call comments are due by Tuesday, October 15 2013 at 2400 UTC (2 weeks
> > and one day from today). Any necessary updates will therefore still be able
> to
> > be submitted before the Vancouver publication deadline of October 21.
> >
> > Please send all technical comments to the STORM WG mailing list:
> > storm@ietf.org
> > Editorial comments may be sent directly to the authors: draft-storm-rdmap-
> > ext@tools.ietf.org
> >
> > Tom Talpey
> > STORM WG co-chair
> >
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