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Re: [storm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7306 (4443)

"Black, David" <david.black@emc.com> Tue, 11 August 2015 17:20 UTC

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From: "Black, David" <david.black@emc.com>
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Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7306 (4443)
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Date: Tue, 11 Aug 2015 17:19:51 +0000
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Subject: Re: [storm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7306 (4443)
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That errata report appears to be correct - this looks like a copy/paste
error in the Appendix, specifically part of A.2 diagram copied from A.1 .

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
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> Cc: chenwumao@huawei.com; storm@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7306 (4443)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7306,
> "Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) Protocol Extensions".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7306&eid=4443
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Chen Wumao <chenwumao@huawei.com>
> 
> Section: A.2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    |              DDP (Atomic Operation Request) Queue Number      |
>    +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>    |        DDP (Atomic Operation Request) Message Sequence Number |
>    +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>    |             DDP (Atomic Operation Request) Message Offset     |
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    |             DDP (Atomic Operation Response) Queue Number      |
>    +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>    |       DDP (Atomic Operation Response) Message Sequence Number |
>    +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
>    |            DDP (Atomic Operation Response) Message Offset     |
> 
> Notes
> -----
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC7306 (draft-ietf-storm-rdmap-ext-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA) Protocol Extensions
> Publication Date    : June 2014
> Author(s)           : H. Shah, F. Marti, W. Noureddine, A. Eiriksson, R. Sharp
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : STORage Maintenance
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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