Re: [storm] Working Group Last Call on "iFCP and Protocol 133 Updates"
Tom Talpey <ttalpey@microsoft.com> Fri, 19 February 2010 04:24 UTC
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From: Tom Talpey <ttalpey@microsoft.com>
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I will pitch in with one more, then. The two RFC4172 terms "address translation mode" and "address transparent mode" are quite similar, and the draft specifies quite a different fate for each one. I would suggest clarifying the distinction more sharply in the second paragraph of the introduction by (perhaps) adding bullets to the terms where first introduced, and also making clear that both are actually defined in RFC4172. Tom. > -----Original Message----- > From: storm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:storm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf > Of Black_David@emc.com > Sent: Thursday, February 18, 2010 11:31 AM > To: storm@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [storm] Working Group Last Call on "iFCP and Protocol 133 > Updates" > > In the interest of their being at least one Last Call comment, I reviewed my > own draft ;-). > > The second paragraph of the Introduction needs a concluding sentence to > state that no change is being made to the IANA allocation of IP Protocol > number 133 so that the reader who skipped the abstract doesn't have to go > all the way down to section 4 to find out that nothing is being changed. > > There we go, that's one comment ... > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ---------------------------------------------------- > _______________________________________________ > storm mailing list > storm@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/storm