Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04

Philipp Hancke <fippo@goodadvice.pages.de> Sun, 20 April 2014 17:08 UTC

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Am 06.04.2014 20:20, schrieb Yana Stamcheva:
> The editors and the chairs believe that the following draft is now ready and hereby start a 2-week Working Group Last Call for:
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> draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04 : http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04 (Last updated on 2014-03-25)
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> The WGLC ends on April 21, 2014.
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> Please review the document and bring any remaining issues, or issues whose resolution is not satisfactory, to the attention of the Working Group on this list before April 21.
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> If after reviewing the document you find it complete and do not have any comments, please send a note to that effect as well!

Looking good to me.

In some of the examples, a Content-Length header is given, in others 
there is an ellipsis. I'd recommend replacing the given lengths with
an ellipsis whenever it is nonzero.

The content-lengths affected by this would be 182, 214, 163, 20,
I am pretty sure that some of these were calculated with linefeed 
instead of CRLF whereas others (163) seem just wrong.

cheers

philipp