[Stox] Pete Resnick's comments on draft-ietf-stox-groupchat

Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Thu, 05 March 2015 18:28 UTC

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Subject: [Stox] Pete Resnick's comments on draft-ietf-stox-groupchat
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Still catching up on missed feedback...

Pete Resnick wrote:

    4: There's a noun missing here:

       By contrast, in
       MSRP sessions (including groupchat sessions) are considered to
       be a type of media (similar to audio/video sessions)

Actually that should be "in MSRP," or "sessions (including groupchat 
sessions) in MSRP"...

    The bullet list refers to "muc.example.com", but Figure 1 shows
    "rooms.example.com".

Noted.

    The particular endpoints for both romeo and juliet are not shown in
    the figure, but the bullet list doesn't say, "not shown in diagram".

I think it's best to specify that each of those things at the bottom of 
the diagram are indeed the endpoints. You can't communicate from a mere 
account, only from a connected endpoint.

Peter

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