Re: [Stox] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-stox-core-07

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 09 December 2013 17:29 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Stox] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-stox-core-07
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Peter Saint-Andre [mailto:stpeter@stpeter.im]
> 
> How about s/inaugurates/provides the basis for/ ?
> 

Fine. 

Thanks, 

Dan