Re: [Stox] Post-WGLC review: draft-ietf-stox-im-06
Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Wed, 22 January 2014 18:44 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Stox] Post-WGLC review: draft-ietf-stox-im-06
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Hi Mary, thanks for the review and my apologies for the delayed reply. On 12/24/13 1:22 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: > HI all, > > I've reviewed the document and believe it's ready to progress with a > couple of minor clarification/nit fixes required. > > - Section 1, 1st bullet. RFC 3428 was not developed in the SIMPLE WG. > It was a product of the old SIP WG. I would suggest to reword that > bullet as follows: > Various extensions to the Session Initiation Protocol ([RFC3261]) > for instant messaging, including the MESSAGE method extension > [RFC3428]. Agreed. > - Related to my previous comment, there shouldn't be any references to > a SIMPLE-XMPP Gateway, which is used widely in the document, although > there are some places where SIP-XMPP is used, which is more correct. > > - All occurrences of "SIMPLE Server" should be changed to "SIP Server" The reason we use the term SIMPLE here is that a base SIP server or gateway would not necessarily have awareness of the instant messaging extensions to SIP, and "SIMPLE server" is less wordy than "IM-aware SIP server". But if the latter is more accurate then I'm happy to make that change. Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/
- [Stox] Post-WGLC review: draft-ietf-stox-im-06 Mary Barnes
- Re: [Stox] Post-WGLC review: draft-ietf-stox-im-06 Peter Saint-Andre