Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-7248bis-09.txt

[Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]>]

On 9/7/16 2:39 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Hi Peter,
>
> I think version 10 is very close to ready. I have two minor comments;
> for the most part these don't change the interaction. I've actually
> suggested text this time :-)
>
> -4, list item 1:
>
> OLD:
>   Instead of forwarding a SUBSCRIBE message to the SIP user, the
> Presence Server
>   would act on the basis of a policy set by the SIP User Agent using the ’
>   presence.winfo’ event package, for which the SIP user would receive
> events.
> NEW:
>   Instead of forwarding a SUBSCRIBE message to the SIP user, the
> Presence Server
>   would inform the user of subscription activity using the ’presence.winfo’
>   event package.
>
> -5.1, paragraph after bullet list:
> OLD:
>    As described in [RFC3856], SIP presence authorizations are
>    effectively implicit: when a SIP user receives an initial SIP
>    SUBSCRIBE event from a contact, the recipient’s SIP User Agent will
>    prompt the user to approve or deny the request.
> NEW:
>    As described in [RFC3856], in SIP the subscriber does not explicitly
>    request the creation or removal of presence authorizations. Rather,
>    the authorizations are triggered by subscription activity. When a
>    SIP user receives an initial SIP SUBSCRIBE event from a contact,
>    the recipient’s SIP User Agent or presence server notifies the
>    user to make an authorization policy decision.

Definite improvements. Would you like me to submit a revised I-D? Easy 
enough. :-)

Peter