Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt
Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Thu, 22 August 2013 02:24 UTC
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Hi Mary, thanks for the review! On 8/21/13 2:33 PM, Mary Barnes wrote: > I've reviewed this version of the document and overall, I think the > document is ready for WGLC/progressing. I have a minor comment and nit > that could be fixed before or after the document goes through WGLC. As > far as the error code handling, I think the text you added in the -02 is > fine and I don't have concerns about the mappings that are suggested. > > Minor comments/Nits: > - Section 5.3 (1st para, last sentence): "resource part" -> "resourcepart" Noted. > - Section 5.4 & 5.5. I personally would find a couple of examples, > highlighting some of the rules (e.g., for the disallowed characters, > etc.) of the mapping to be quite helpful. As always, they aren't > normative, but I think it would help cement the rules in some of our > brains. Good idea. We'll work those into the next revision. Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/
- [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt internet-drafts
- Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt Mary Barnes
- Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt Peter Saint-Andre