[Stox] Comments on draft-ietf-stox-presence-00

[Michael Lundberg <[e-mail]>]

Peter,
I think draft-ietf-stox-presence-00 looks good.  I had a previous comment
to an earlier version that was not addressed that I'm incuding it again as
I think it is important for the document.

I think it would be good to add the <show/> element to Table 7, with a note
similar to the one provided in Table 6.  This will provide a method for
mapping 'away' and 'dnd' information in the opposite direction.  Similar to
the note in Table 6, this would require the SIP implementation to support
the 'jabber:client' namespace.  If the SIP implementation supports the
namespace, the gateway can then map the values directly into the <show/>
element of the XMPP presence messages.

The only other thing I saw was that the below sentence in Section 3.2.3 is
missing the word "send" after SHOULD.

Current:

Upon sending the transformed unsubscribe, the XMPP-SIMPLE gateway SHOULD a
presence stanza of type "unsubscribed" to the XMPP user:

New:

Upon sending the transformed unsubscribe, the XMPP-SIMPLE gateway SHOULD
send a presence stanza of type "unsubscribed" to the XMPP user:

Regards,
Michael