Re: [Stox] Comments on draft-ietf-stox-presence-00

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Wed, 24 July 2013 03:08 UTC

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Hi Mike, thanks for the feedback.

On 7/19/13 6:01 AM, Michael Lundberg wrote:
> Peter,
> 
> I think draft-ietf-stox-presence-00 looks good.  I had a previous 
> comment to an earlier version that was not addressed that I'm
> incuding it again as I think it is important for the document.

Sorry I missed that.

> I think it would be good to add the <show/> element to Table 7,
> with a note similar to the one provided in Table 6. This will
> provide a method for mapping 'away' and 'dnd' information in the
> opposite direction.

Agreed.

(BTW, these are actually Table 1 and Table 2 -- we need to fix the
numbering.)

> Similar to the note in Table 6, this would require the SIP 
> implementation to support the 'jabber:client' namespace.  If the
> SIP implementation supports the namespace, the gateway can then map
> the values directly into the <show/> element of the XMPP presence
> messages.

True.

One clarifying question: when you say "if the SIP implementation
supports the namespace", do you mean the XMPP-to-SIP gateway or the
SIP user agent?

> The only other thing I saw was that the below sentence in Section
> 3.2.3 is missing the word "send" after SHOULD.
> 
> Current:
> 
> Upon sending the transformed unsubscribe, the XMPP-SIMPLE gateway
> SHOULD a presence stanza of type "unsubscribed" to the XMPP user:
> 
> New:
> 
> Upon sending the transformed unsubscribe, the XMPP-SIMPLE gateway
> SHOULD send a presence stanza of type "unsubscribed" to the XMPP
> user:

Noted. :-)

Peter

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