Re: [Stox] I-D Action: draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt

Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com> Wed, 21 August 2013 20:33 UTC

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I've reviewed this version of the document and overall, I think the
document is ready for WGLC/progressing.  I have a minor comment and nit
that could be fixed before or after the document goes through WGLC.  As far
as the error code handling, I think the text you added in the -02 is fine
and I don't have concerns about the mappings that are suggested.

Minor comments/Nits:
- Section 5.3 (1st para, last sentence):  "resource part" -> "resourcepart"

- Section 5.4 & 5.5.  I personally would find a couple of examples,
highlighting some of the rules (e.g., for the disallowed characters, etc.)
of the mapping to be quite helpful. As always, they aren't normative, but I
think it would help cement the rules in some of our brains.

Regards,
Mary


On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 3:42 PM, Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>wrote:

> As previously mentioned.
>
> I view some of this text as provisional, but submitting a revised I-D
> seemed to be the best way for folks to review it.
>
> On 8/19/13 2:41 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >  This draft is a work item of the SIP-TO-XMPP Working Group of the IETF.
> >
> >       Title           : Interworking between the Session Initiation
> Protocol (SIP) and the Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP):
> Architecture, Addresses, and Error Handling
> >       Author(s)       : Peter Saint-Andre
> >                           Avshalom Houri
> >                           Joe Hildebrand
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-stox-core-02.txt
> >       Pages           : 16
> >       Date            : 2013-08-19
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    As a foundation for the definition of bidirectional protocol mappings
> >    between the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) and the Extensible
> >    Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP), this document specifies the
> >    architectural assumptions underlying such mappings as well as the
> >    mapping of addresses and error conditions.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-stox-core
> >
> > There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stox-core-02
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-stox-core-02
> >
> >
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