Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04

[Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]>]

On 4/20/14, 11:08 AM, Philipp Hancke wrote:
> Am 06.04.2014 20:20, schrieb Yana Stamcheva:
>> The editors and the chairs believe that the following draft is now
>> ready and hereby start a 2-week Working Group Last Call for:
>>
>> draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04 :
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stox-groupchat-04 (Last updated
>> on 2014-03-25)
>>
>> The WGLC ends on April 21, 2014.
>>
>> Please review the document and bring any remaining issues, or issues
>> whose resolution is not satisfactory, to the attention of the Working
>> Group on this list before April 21.
>>
>> If after reviewing the document you find it complete and do not have
>> any comments, please send a note to that effect as well!
>
> Looking good to me.
>
> In some of the examples, a Content-Length header is given, in others
> there is an ellipsis. I'd recommend replacing the given lengths with
> an ellipsis whenever it is nonzero.
>
> The content-lengths affected by this would be 182, 214, 163, 20,
> I am pretty sure that some of these were calculated with linefeed
> instead of CRLF whereas others (163) seem just wrong.

I think we added those content-lengths quite a while ago and didn't 
necessarily keep them in sync with the payloads. Ellipsis solves that 
problem neatly :-)

Thanks for the review!

Peter