Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-core-06
Philipp Hancke <fippo@goodadvice.pages.de> Thu, 17 October 2013 21:31 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-core-06
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Am 08.10.2013 12:35, schrieb Yana Stamcheva: > The editors and the chairs believe that the following draft is now ready and hereby start a 2-week Working Group Last Call for: Overall the document is looking good to me. Nits: - in section 1 it could abbreviate the XMPP Standards foundation as XSF - section 3: "application specific connection managers" reminds me of the terminology used by the first jabberd server. Is that clear to everyone else? - there is an extra whitespace before the opening parenthesis in the second paragraph of section 3. I'm also wondering if it would make sense to transform the parenthesised text into a Note: - the most recent version of XEP 0106 is from June 2007, not May 2005 as stated in section 9.2
- [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-core-06 Yana Stamcheva
- Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-core-06 Philipp Hancke
- Re: [Stox] WGLC for draft-ietf-stox-core-06 Peter Saint-Andre