[Suit] Feedback on draft-ietf-suit-architecture-05
Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Thu, 11 April 2019 15:17 UTC
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From: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
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Subject: [Suit] Feedback on draft-ietf-suit-architecture-05
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I reviewed draft-ietf-suit-architecture-05. My comments (including many editorial nits and comments) are in the marked up copy at https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2017/05/draft-ietf-suit-architecture-05.pdf Dave