Re: [Suit] draft-tschofenig-suit-firmware-encryption-00

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Tue, 25 May 2021 11:43 UTC

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Nice!

Editorial comment:
Can I suggest you use the 8152bis style of putting in the examples as opposed to the 8152 style that you are using now?
(They differ in the use of EDN, particularly Appendix G.3 of RFC 8610.)
[There is also some inventive comment syntax that has not been adopted in RFC 8610.]

Grüße, Carsten