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Re: [Suit] SUIT rechartering: proposed text

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Fri, 23 July 2021 17:54 UTC

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Dave:

> > …
> > The SUIT WG document deliverables are:
> > * A SUIT manifest format specification using CBOR.
> > * A firmware encryption specification for use with SUIT manifests.
> > * A secure for IoT device to reporting on firmware update status.
>  
> I can’t parse the above bullet, maybe a word missing right before “for IoT device”?

Yep, that is messed up.  How about:

   * A secure method for an IoT device to report on firmware update status.

>  > * A set of claims related for attesting to firmware update status.
>  
> Remove “related”.

Yep.

Russ

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