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Re: [Suit] SUIT rechartering: proposed text

Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Fri, 23 July 2021 18:03 UTC

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From: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
CC: suit <suit@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Suit] SUIT rechartering: proposed text
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Agree with those fixes.
Thanks Russ.

From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
Sent: Friday, July 23, 2021 10:54 AM
To: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
Cc: suit <suit@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Suit] SUIT rechartering: proposed text

Dave:


> …
> The SUIT WG document deliverables are:
> * A SUIT manifest format specification using CBOR.
> * A firmware encryption specification for use with SUIT manifests.
> * A secure for IoT device to reporting on firmware update status.

I can’t parse the above bullet, maybe a word missing right before “for IoT device”?

Yep, that is messed up.  How about:

   * A secure method for an IoT device to report on firmware update status.


 > * A set of claims related for attesting to firmware update status.

Remove “related”.

Yep.

Russ

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