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Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Mon, 22 May 2023 07:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
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Hi Marie-José,

On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> wrote:
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> Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.

Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just returned from vacation).

>  My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.

<hats off>

I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on documents to this more general overview.
So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial new information about them.

Grüße, Carsten

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