Re: [T2TRG] draft-hong-t2trg-iot-edge-computing-04

Xavier de Foy <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 26 May 2020 19:25 UTC

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Date: Tue, 26 May 2020 15:25:03 -0400
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Subject: Re: [T2TRG] draft-hong-t2trg-iot-edge-computing-04
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Hi Thomas, thanks for taking the time to check the update, and for the
positive feedback. Hopefully new reviewers will help progress the draft
further.
Best Regards,
Xavier.

On Tue, May 26, 2020 at 1:05 PM Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
wrote:

> Hi Xavier,
>
> On 25/05/2020, 19:19, "Xavier de Foy" <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> > This new version includes the comments/suggestions from Thomas on the
> > mailing list, and improvements discussed in the IETF 107 presentation
> > (research challenges added in 4.3.x sections, new distributed system
> > example in 4.2, security considerations, improvements to flow and
> > readability).
> >
> > Additional comments and reviews are most welcome,
>
> This doesn't count as an "additional review" but, FWIW,
> I have read the new version and was pleased with the result.
>
> Thanks, cheers!
>
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