Re: [T2TRG] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt

Hello,

I don't want to be pedantic but please go over the document one more time
and fix the typo and grammar mistakes. I've found a few, nothing that would
make a difference but just easier to read.

Some of the things I saw:

smart phone vs. smartphone -> debatable, but I think the spelling without
the blank in the middle is more common
Distribute -> should be Distributed
software reserve engineered -> should be reverse engineered
( summarized in Section 5.1) -> should be (summarized in Section 5.1)

Thanks,
Thorsten

On 28 May 2017 at 13:32, Mohit Sethi <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Hi folks,
>
> We have updated the security considerations draft based on the extensive
> feedback we have received on the SAAG and T2TRG mailing lists. The current
> version of the draft can be found here:
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>
> We have now made the document more concise and it focuses on the
> state-of-the-art and challenges for IoT security. We will work on a
> separate document that contains the security profiles and mitigation
> mechanisms based on the feedback from the group. The authors believe that
> the document is now more or less ready and in good shape. Your feedback and
> comments are appreciated as always.
>
> Oscar, Sandeep and Mohit
>
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: [T2TRG] I-D Action: draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt
> Date: Wed, 24 May 2017 01:49:29 -0700
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> CC: t2trg@irtf.org
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Thing-to-Thing of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : State of the Art and Challenges for the Internet of Things
>         Authors         : Oscar Garcia-Morchon
>                           Sandeep S. Kumar
>                           Mohit Sethi
> 	Filename        : draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 46
> 	Date            : 2017-05-24
>
> Abstract:
>    The Internet of Things (IoT) concept refers to the usage of standard
>    Internet protocols to allow for human-to-thing and thing-to-thing
>    communication.  The security needs are well-recognized and and many
>    standardization steps for providing security have been taken, for
>    example, the specification of Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)
>    over Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS).  However, security
>    challenges still exist and there are some use cases that lack a
>    suitable solution.  In this document, we first discuss the various
>    stages in the lifecycle of a thing.  We then look at the security
>    building blocks available for securing the different layers of the
>    Internet protocol suite.  Next, we document the various security
>    threats to a thing and the challenges that one might face in order to
>    protect against these threats.  Lastly, we discuss the next steps
>    needed to ensure roll out of secure Internet of Things services.
>
>    This document is a product of the IRTF Thing-to-Thing Research Group
>    (T2TRG).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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