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Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> Mon, 22 May 2023 09:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
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I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very
dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on
documents to this more general overview.
So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial
new information about them.

I’m fine. Maybe just adding a few words then and we look at future
documents :)


mjm


Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.
marie@mjmontpetit.com



From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
Reply: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
Date: May 22, 2023 at 3:16:30 AM
To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
Cc: 정하 홍 <jhong@etri.re.kr> <jhong@etri.re.kr>, yonggeun.hong@gmail.com
<yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>, Xavier De Foy
<xavier.defoy@interdigital.com> <xavier.defoy@interdigital.com>,
ietf@kovatsch.net <ietf@kovatsch.net> <ietf@kovatsch.net>, Eve Schooler
<eve.schooler@gmail.com> <eve.schooler@gmail.com>, Dirk Kutscher
<ietf@dkutscher.net> <ietf@dkutscher.net>, Internet Research Steering Group
<irsg@irtf.org> <irsg@irtf.org>, t2trg@irtf.org <t2trg@irtf.org>
<t2trg@irtf.org>
Subject:  Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Hi Marie-José,

On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
wrote:
>
> Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very
current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.

Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just
returned from vacation).

> My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the
document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the
use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a
main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should
be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.

<hats off>

I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very
dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on
documents to this more general overview.
So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial
new information about them.

Grüße, Carsten

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