Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> Tue, 23 May 2023 19:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [T2TRG] [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge
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I just realized that Mobile EdgeX that is mentioned in the draft was
acquired by Google. So should be updated.

mjm

Marie-José Montpetit, Ing. Ph.D.
marie@mjmontpetit.com



From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
Reply: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> <cabo@tzi.org>
Date: May 22, 2023 at 3:16:30 AM
To: Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com> <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
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Subject:  Re: [irsg] Review of draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-edge

Hi Marie-José,

On 2023-05-19, at 18:41, Marie-Jose Montpetit <marie@mjmontpetit.com>
wrote:
>
> Sorry for the delay. Thanks for your efforts on this as IoT edge is very
current. I commented directly on the pdf - attached.

Thank you for the detailed review, which I still have to digest (just
returned from vacation).

> My overall evaluation is that while everything in the draft is valid the
document needs a little bit of updating. IoT is exploding and some of the
use cases have evolved since you started the draft. And AIoT/AI is now a
main driver. Finally, while digital twinning is briefly mentioned it should
be expanded is now also inherently part of the IoT edge.

<hats off>

I agree that both AI and DT should be mentioned, but I think these very
dynamic fields would also make great subjects for more detailed follow-on
documents to this more general overview.
So I wouldn’t recommend delaying the overview while we collect substantial
new information about them.

Grüße, Carsten