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Hi Xavier,

On 20/04/2020, 20:10, "Xavier de Foy" <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> > [...].  In particular, I'm having a bit of trouble with Section 3.5
> > content-/scope-wise.  I also found forward reference to Appendix A
> > slightly confusing.  It probably needs a bit of reorg to disentangle
> > the various threads into a clearer picture.
>
> [xavier] Yes, it seems best to cut section 3.5 from appendix A, frame
> it better as a current "state of the art" overview and maybe place it
> later in the document (e.g. after the challenges on IoT, and before
> describing the functions).

Sounds like a good plan.

> > Appendix A.  It's a good snapshot but it has an intrinsic "aging"
> > problem.  Maybe better keeping its content in a living document and
> > referencing it from here?
>
> [xavier] Agreed, keeping the appendix may not be a good long term
> solution. I assume by living document you mean another individual
> draft?

When I suggested that, I had something like [1] and [2] in mind.

[1] https://github.com/HQarroum/awesome-iot
[2] https://github.com/weblancaster/awesome-IoT-hybrid

cheers!

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