Re: [Taps] Robert Wilton's Yes on draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-11: (with COMMENT)

Hi Robert,

Thanks for the review, and I’m glad this was a useful reference for you. You can find an updated version of the document here:

https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security.html <https://ietf-tapswg.github.io/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security.html>

We have added new text to address all of the editorial points you brought up.

Thanks,
Tommy

> On Apr 6, 2020, at 10:12 AM, Robert Wilton via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-11: Yes
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> As incoming AD I found that document really useful and informative - thank you.
> 
> As a minor nit, I found the English around the usage of the term "Transport
> Services", that I wasn't familiar with prior to reading this document, slightly
> tricky to parse in the introduction, particularly because the term isn't
> defined until the Terminology in section 3.
> 
> E.g. in the second paragraph it isn't clear to me what a "Transport Services
> system" real means.  Possibly replace "a Transport Services system may need to
> support" with "a Transport Service may need to support"?
> 
> Similarly, perhaps change " One of the goals of Transport Services is to define
> a common interface for using transport protocols" to " One of the goals of
> Transport Service definitions is to define a common interface for using
> transport protocols"?
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