[Taps] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-taps-minset-10

Linda Dunbar <ldunbar@huawei.com> Fri, 21 September 2018 19:09 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Almost Ready,  with comments

During my review period, the authors have updated the drafts twice, which have
addressed many of  my previous comments well.

Only one more comment: Can you provide some sample "Applications" that actually
do differently depending on the Host OS'  Transport capability? All the
"Applications" I know of usually finalize on which Transport Protocols to use
and which transport layer capability is necessary and can only be placed on the
Host OS that meet the requirement.

Thank you.

Linda Dunbar